At least it's not a test animation like so many of the submissions clogging judgement right now.
Edit: Hamburger man make me chuckle as well.
At least it's not a test animation like so many of the submissions clogging judgement right now.
Edit: Hamburger man make me chuckle as well.
You're technically right, but that doesn't really have much to do with the cartoon itself.
Edit: Yeah! Now THAT was in the cartoon!
Every second of this absolute trip freaking ruled!
you're so kind thank you!!!!
Not bad, I always liked these kinds of fantasy battle sprite animations and this one was pretty decent.
The biggest thing that I think could've been done better is that the Doomguy sprite was pretty bland and blurry, which looks especially weird when juxtaposed with Samus's brightly colored armour and higher quality sprite that contrasts really well with the scenery. I'm assuming you got the sprites from somewhere online? In the future I'd recommend collaborating with a specific pixel artist to get your assets custom made, that way even if they're not the highest possible quality, they'll still look consistent next to one another.
Overall, as far as first submissions go, this one was pretty good, and I hope you make more of these in the future.
Also, I saw on your profile that you just joined today, so welcome to Newgrounds! Keep up with the animation and keep improving and I'm sure you'll do well here.
Thanks
Ladies and gentleman, it's been an honor to help you all make this fuckin' cat's life a living hell!
Fantastic work everyone!
Likewise man!
Dude, this is freakin' sweet!
I love this concept and the humor here, and the animation style suits it well.
This would make for a great series if you have anymore ideas for it.
Keep up the good work!
i have 2 seasons planned out.first season he wakens the other ancient ones season two he has to kill them.
Good idea and decent execution, but it kind of dies on the main character's design, unique as it may be (I can honestly say I've never seen a character design that was just a line with eyes), it kind of blends in a little too well with any background that's not a perfectly solid color.
The animation was kind of choppy too and the abrupt cuts are pretty disorienting, specifically when he fell down the stairs or when he was hit with the fire extinguisher, this has away of taking away the impact and killing the gag.
Overall, I'm happy with the fact that you said you're going to remake it because I see potential for a good short here, and I will be following you for when that remake is complete.
I can say that these issues will definitely be fixed in the new version I'm making. I'm sure you can also point out that I made this before I even knew that Adobe Animate had a way to control the camera. That "zoom in" was done automatically and boy, does it show.
Anyway, Thank you for the feedback. Always appreciated.
Really good work on this, it's been a while since I've seen some good claymation.
You've earned yourself a follower, can't wait to see what you come out with in the future.
Thank you. I'm working on something right now. It's not claymation but I'll make some more of that in the future too.
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