Dude, this is freakin' sweet!
I love this concept and the humor here, and the animation style suits it well.
This would make for a great series if you have anymore ideas for it.
Keep up the good work!
Dude, this is freakin' sweet!
I love this concept and the humor here, and the animation style suits it well.
This would make for a great series if you have anymore ideas for it.
Keep up the good work!
i have 2 seasons planned out.first season he wakens the other ancient ones season two he has to kill them.
Good idea and decent execution, but it kind of dies on the main character's design, unique as it may be (I can honestly say I've never seen a character design that was just a line with eyes), it kind of blends in a little too well with any background that's not a perfectly solid color.
The animation was kind of choppy too and the abrupt cuts are pretty disorienting, specifically when he fell down the stairs or when he was hit with the fire extinguisher, this has away of taking away the impact and killing the gag.
Overall, I'm happy with the fact that you said you're going to remake it because I see potential for a good short here, and I will be following you for when that remake is complete.
I can say that these issues will definitely be fixed in the new version I'm making. I'm sure you can also point out that I made this before I even knew that Adobe Animate had a way to control the camera. That "zoom in" was done automatically and boy, does it show.
Anyway, Thank you for the feedback. Always appreciated.
Such a simple joke, yet so funny.
Good one, 8/10!
Really good work on this, it's been a while since I've seen some good claymation.
You've earned yourself a follower, can't wait to see what you come out with in the future.
Thank you. I'm working on something right now. It's not claymation but I'll make some more of that in the future too.
Eh, he's still got two lives left. He'll respawn eventually.
Funny stuff though, everything I could've wanted from a title like Mario Freakin' Dies.
Good work!
These are some very interesting and well made visuals. I love the mix of 2D and 3D animation.
This is some real front page material, I've gotta say! I think I'll go recommend it right now.
This feels like a good alegory for life.
Just keep going, because if you stop for even a second then you'll be run over by a truck.
10/10, would go fast again.
Life is full of regrets, Garfield.
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